I'm a day behind, but had to join in this one. Part 1 of the Hookers & Hangers Blogfest. For part 1 participants post first sentences from each chapter and for part 2 last sentences of each chapter. You can post as many as you want. Since I'm launching a new book this month, I guess you're going to read my hookers from Alligators Overhead.
1. Pete chewed on what was left of his right thumbnail, stared up at the round-faced clock above Aunt Lizzie's desk and watched it tick off his last minutes of freedom.
2. A giant ten-foot-tall Harriet Hadley held Pete up by the shirtfront and shook him until his eyes rolled like marbles in their sockets.
3. They moved as fast as the dark mist allowed--down the path and into the swamp just the way they'd done hundreds of times before.
Any of these HOOK you? Hope so. Here's some others having fun and trying to hook your interest.
I'm a writer who captures the pulse of adolescent confusion in my Young Adult fiction, Sliding on the Edge and The Princess of Las Pulgas. Of course, I often reveal a lot of my Old Adult confusion while doing that. I've just published my first Middle Grade fantasy titled Alligators Overhead. My blog posts come on Mondays & Thursdays unless there's something important, then they come as needed.
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Love these! Rooting for Pete already! :)
ReplyDeleteI especially like that bit about ticking off the last minutes of freedom :)
ReplyDeleteI love names people put in MG books. Harriet Hadley, SO great. And these hookers really make me want to know what happens to poor Pete, and why he's losing his freedom!
ReplyDeleteThese definitely hook me! You have a great way with words. Thanks for sharing :)
ReplyDeleteI can't decide on a favourite, though the first one does have serious impact.
Wow, I love your hooks! Each one made me want the book, right now! :p
ReplyDeleteGreat hooks, all of them. I am going to choose #2.Thanks for stopping by my post and for following.
ReplyDeleteWow. #2 caught my attention.
ReplyDeleteI love these - I can't even choose a favorite. Well done on all of them!
ReplyDelete1 and 2 definitely made me ask why. I suspect big developments come from 3. Have fun with the blogfest.
ReplyDeleteWow these are great! The voice behind them is so spot on and I love the pictures that come to mind just from the few short sentences. Awesome, awesome, awesome!
ReplyDeleteGreat hookers! Checking out your hangers right meow :)
ReplyDeleteOK, I'm definitely intrigued about this book. Number one makes me ask loads of questions. Great job!
ReplyDeleteSuper hooks! I can feel Pete's anticipation or unhappiness in the first one. Well done!
ReplyDelete~Jess
Loved these chapter hooks. Harriet Hadley sounds scary. I loved that description. :)
ReplyDeleteNice job! I think I like the first one the most! Thanks for joining us!
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