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Saturday, February 26, 2011

If it Smells Like a Cliché, It is a Cliché. Try Something Different: First Lines lll

The first two posts on First Lines were about Tone and Gimmicks. This one is about that all too horrible animal--the cliché and how you might avoid starting without one. 




Of course, "It was a dark and stormy night;" is the first one that comes to mind, but what are some others? Here are a couple that agents and editors see a lot.


"At first morning's light she opened her eyes and  . . ."


"We would arrive at the new house in only minutes and . . . "




Now, not all cliches in writing are bad; they convey images and information quickly and concisely, and sometimes they are great at characterization; however, unless you're trying to reveal a character, unless the idea of cliche is central to your story, unless there is absolutely no other way to say what you want, I'd not start with one. Well, I wouldn't these days, but that's because I have in the past and had my hand slapped.


So how can you avoid cliches in a world where everyone and his pet hamster are writing and publishing--where social media sends ideas around the world instantly, so that what was fresh and exciting in the morning is stale and . . . clichéd by noon?


Here are some ideas I've pulled together from other writers and people who have real talent in this business of writing and knowing what's good.


Start writing where you feel a spark. Do you really have a character firmly in your head, in your heart? Then write about that character: describe him, let him talk the way you hear his voice, put him into a place that he fits.


Skip writing that first sentence and write the second or the third. Hey, go for broke (cliche alert) and write the second paragraph. Then promise yourself you'll go back later and write the first one. Guess what? You may not have to. You may have already written it.


Pick the most exciting, the most vivid scene in your book. Write that scene. The heck with the opening line. You can always do that later, right?


So, let's say you really write dialog like a New York Times best seller writes it. Don't. Instead, force yourself to start your book with description or narration--something you're not as good at writing. Re-writing is always an option, so you can always go back and do that opening dialog . . . or not.


Do you have some techniques that help you get those first lines just right? Care to share?:



6 comments:

  1. Sometimes when I'm creating a new character in my head, they say something to me that really reflects their personality. I'll usually use that line as my story starter. Why? Because it lets the reader get to know my character's personality right away. I write in first person, so this trick works for me. I'm not sure if it would translate as well to third person, but I imagine it would work.

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  2. Good advice, C. Lee! First chapters always get tweaked later anyway, so don't sweat it going into your project! I also mix it up in terms of writing some scenes out of order. When I'm losing steam, or confused, or any of those things, I write a scene that's way in the future, one that I get a strong visual on, or have great feeling for. Then, I not only get my juice back but I have something concrete to write toward.

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  3. One technique I've heard is good is go ahead and write that first chapter then in revision junk it and start with the second chapter. Twice it's worked for me.

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  4. Great advice! Using a cliche is a sure way to turn off readers. I tend to throw it on paper and then fix it up later if it doesn't work. Because I'm not stressed about it, it actually often works :)

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  5. I always have to rewrite my first page. But knowing that ahead of time allows me to move on. LOL

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  6. Looks like we're all on the same page, er, first page. Lovely. And thanks for the comments.

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